Action Plan.

As of 28th February 2008.

Produce/finish Rough cut finish.
Produce/ finish Soundtrack.
Finish editing final piece, Shot transitions, Special effects.
Rolling titles to be incorporated.
Diegetic sounds to be created. Phonetically? such as footsteps.

Finish incomplete blog entries.

Feedback On Roughcut

Editing:
Make shots shorter.

Camerawork:
Effective panning shots

Sound: /

Mise en Scene:
Good use of derelict setting.
Props helped to create curiosity.
Location is mysterious
Props set sinister atmosphere.

Storyline:
Could be about Kidnapp?

Narrative:
A lot of mystery.
Starts web of intrigue
Good contrast with "the normal" and "the weird".
Shots of dolls are cool but hard to understand why they are there.
I like the writing on the wall.

Needs to be edited properly.
Shots needed to be shorter with quick transitions.