Feedback On Our Final Piece

does the opening catch your attention?

Yes.
Not that much because there is a lot of confusion. I think the audience would like to understand some parts before carrying on.

Can you describe what happens in our thriller?

Location is set.
Character has been captured.
Kidnapper is about to attack/torture her.
Location is eerie.
Characters footsteps are introduced.
Girl- Sense of mystery.
Victim is presented in state of shock, at being kidnapped.
kidnapping?

Have we used mise en scene effectively?
Loction creepy.
Dolls effective- creepy.
Effective location- very secluded.
Beleiveable in the middle of knowhere.
props added to confusion and mystery of place.
Hung baby?
Location moldable?
Dolls disturbing.
Use of dialect building effective.

Opinions

What do you like about the thriller?

- visuals were effective

What people didn't like

- Music stopped half way through
- Whole thing was quite short.