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I think your idea contains many key generic conventions of a thriller such as 'The Gaze', a mystery to be solved and the contrast of the familiar with the terrifying.
You have given good consideration to locations, props and your planning so far looks good.
Your blog needs a full shot list, more research such as a location report that details images of the location, why it is suitable and any potential problems that you forsee.
Good work so far.